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Show HN: Review my new project
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5 points
by gilmanyu
4857 days ago
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Hello HN! I just launched a new social iPhone game called "unun". It's like drawsomething but in a puzzle way. You can also animate your puzzle and message your friend during the game. Would definitely enjoy any feedback so I can make it better! Feel free to check out the demo video and download it from appstore. Demo video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=G8aPmDej65s Download: https://itunes.apple.com/hk/app/unun/id555254223?mt=8 |
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1) Get someone to proofread your app and app copy. There are some awkward sentences in your app description and intro video and also some grammar mistakes. It's pretty late so I don't have time to do it myself.
2) Suggestion: have the player play with a bot (against the computer) in the tutorial so they understand how it works.
3) Suggestion: have the option for the player to play against a random user. Sometimes I don't want to have to invite a friend (because it's annoying).