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by argonaut
4857 days ago
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This is really beautiful. Some notes. 1) Get someone to proofread your app and app copy. There are some awkward sentences in your app description and intro video and also some grammar mistakes. It's pretty late so I don't have time to do it myself. 2) Suggestion: have the player play with a bot (against the computer) in the tutorial so they understand how it works. 3) Suggestion: have the option for the player to play against a random user. Sometimes I don't want to have to invite a friend (because it's annoying). |
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