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by Akring 527 days ago
I rarely post here, so I'm a bit nervous. Sorry for posting the wrong link earlier - here is the correct project link: https://en.newword.app
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A bit of feedback now that I can read it: I'd work on your prose.

> Accumulate a few steps a day to a thousand miles

> Rich and fast way to add, easily manage all the new words encountered in life

> The AI assistant helps you complete daily review, vocabulary expansion, and memorizing words is no longer boring.

These are all understandable, but they're a bit clunky. Are you Chinese, by any chance?

Your vocabulary choice is excellent, but it's the way you word things that is a bit off. I don't mean this in a demeaning way!

You might want to try asking an LLM to talk through rewording it, though I would avoid letting it write your prose wholesale - it'll come off as obviously AI generated.

DeepL write may also be useful:

https://www.deepl.com/en/write#en/en-gb/The%20AI%20assistant....

Thank you so much! I will try DeepL.