| A bit of feedback now that I can read it: I'd work on your prose. > Accumulate a few steps a day to a thousand miles > Rich and fast way to add, easily manage all the new words encountered in life > The AI assistant helps you complete daily review, vocabulary expansion, and memorizing words is no longer boring. These are all understandable, but they're a bit clunky. Are you Chinese, by any chance? Your vocabulary choice is excellent, but it's the way you word things that is a bit off. I don't mean this in a demeaning way! You might want to try asking an LLM to talk through rewording it, though I would avoid letting it write your prose wholesale - it'll come off as obviously AI generated. DeepL write may also be useful: https://www.deepl.com/en/write#en/en-gb/The%20AI%20assistant.... |