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by dj_mc_merlin
758 days ago
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OK, let me rewrite it: > Any body of academic thought whose paradigmatic communication medium is video rather than text is prima facie suspect. Might you please link a written statement of the salient position(s) of any one of these gentlemen? > Academic content is usually in text, not video. Do you have links to written work from them? Shorter and the exact same meaning. Also doesn't sound like you've been perusing your thesaurus all day. |
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The proposed revision suffers from its terseness, losing both nuance and completeness.