[philipmorg]

The landing page for your app is visually appealing, but it focuses on features instead of value. The closest thing to a value statement that appears above the fold on your site is this: "Our easy to use collaboration platform has been built to allow you to work with your documents how you want and need them." But even this statement is quite vague.

If you can answer the following question in the first screen of your landing page, you'll make it easier for potential customers to become actual customers: "How will this app make my life better?"

I'd be happy to help you answer that question for your customers: http://www.hnofficehours.com/profile/philipmorg/