[jeggers5]

+1 for the detailed comment, thanks. Fixed the grammar and am working on some copy to replace the current text, thanks :) also, if you couldn't see the button and logo earlier, it should be fixed now if you want to take a second look, thanks :)

[jeggers5]

Ok, I've changed it around a bit, thoughts?

[iamscanner]

It's much clearer, but I'm a bit confused - does "Stay in the loop without having to share an email address" explain what your app will do, or is it just your way of saying "hey, follow us on Twitter"? I'm expecting that sentence to be your service's pitch.

[jeggers5]

Yep, that's explaining what the App does. I'll make that a little clearer now, thanks :)