[iamscanner]

It's much clearer, but I'm a bit confused - does "Stay in the loop without having to share an email address" explain what your app will do, or is it just your way of saying "hey, follow us on Twitter"? I'm expecting that sentence to be your service's pitch.

[jeggers5]

Yep, that's explaining what the App does. I'll make that a little clearer now, thanks :)