[ccleve]

I don't get that at all from your website. I'd consider simplifying your pitch. I can't tell what you're selling from your site.

[brainless]

Hey thanks. That is not the site, that is the open source project, so meant for technical audience I would say.

What would you say was not clear to you? I have been demoing this to a couple people each week and would love your feedback.

The site also needs updates, but the pitch is more for businesses there. Here is the site: https://dwata.com

[ccleve]

Yes, the site is what I looked at. "Scale your business operations" doesn't tell me anything. Nor does any of the other verbiage in your hero area.

The next thing I see is "What is your professional role?" Uh, who cares? Just tell me what your product is. I'm not interested in vague benefits.

[brainless]

Thanks, yes the hero needs cleaning. I haven't been focusing on the product site for some time.

I'm also going to clean the personas. People usually like that, so I'll have to ask more.