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by ccleve
2113 days ago
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Yes, the site is what I looked at. "Scale your business operations" doesn't tell me anything. Nor does any of the other verbiage in your hero area. The next thing I see is "What is your professional role?" Uh, who cares? Just tell me what your product is. I'm not interested in vague benefits. |
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I'm also going to clean the personas. People usually like that, so I'll have to ask more.