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by tylerrobinson
2235 days ago
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If I may provide some unsolicited feedback, if you are targeting the United States you may want to check the use of the word quotations in this context. I’ve not personally heard “quotation” used this way, so I wasn’t sure what the software is for. Maybe proposal or quote or RFP process would resonate more? (I googled “salesforce quotations” to check myself on this and indeed do not see any results using it that way) Could you explain on the marketing site what type of business this would be best for? Are there other workflow tracking features? For grammar, there are only a handful of things which don’t ring quite true for me as a native speaker, like “stop losing your time” which for its prominence on the page seemed worth mentioning. Others might think it sounds fine, but that felt awkward to me compared with “stop wasting time”, for example. |
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To be honest we, two cofounders, didn't spend days to decide on the words. We both are not native speakers. Google'd some keywords, took a look at dictionary websites and decided quotation was fine. We will do further research on that. Would "offer" work in this context?
We are decided on targeting freelancers and businesses that sell services, like software or advertisement agencies. But to be fair anyone doing business negotiations via sending an offer to a client could possibly use the app. Right now the app is pretty basic as this is a product of 2-nights worth of time and we only went live this week.
"Stop wasting time". Noted.
Again, if you have any more feedback, I'd really appreciate it. You can also contact me on Twitter if you'd prefer. My username is hkanaktas.