Is this good high-concept pitch for Writer.is?

[IvarsIndriks]

I'm meeting investors for http://writer.is And need high concept pitch. I got this one "Typewriting on wallpaper" Is this good?

[erichurkman]

I clicked your link, and clicked "How it works?" and was taken to a registration page. Is that intentional? Why would I sign up for something that I have no clue what it is?

[IvarsIndriks]

Sorry. That is bug. Will fix it.

[IvarsIndriks]

Fixed