[harel]

Just to add to that, this sentence needs reworking: " I have a ton of experience developing web applications, but I have worked with a variety of platforms and technologies to build software and have deployed software to the web, Mac OS X, and Linux."

The word "but" does not sit well there. There is no "but" :)

[mrmondo]

Also probably reword 'I have a ton' - it's a little too informal I think.

[jhgaylor]

Awesome! The page has been updated. I appreciate the feedback. :)