Does anyone want to give me some feedback?

[xavierkelly]

I need some feedback from someone who can give me good feedback on my online marketing Platform I've been working on. Any takers? Maybe we could strike a partnership and build this platform together as like cofounders. If you want instant access go here: overviewmarketingsolutions dot com. I really need some high quality feedback to make sure I am going the right way. Thanks in advance please tell me what you think I've been working really hard on it.

[cdvonstinkpot]

1st impression: Bad grammar/spelling. None of the apostrophies on the front page belong there. Eg. "Policy's" is spelled "policies". Then the 2 above that would be with an "s" at the end of the word, without the ' before them.

It could be clearer what exactly you're offering. I'm left to wonder if I'd get access to all my dashboards scattered across the web. I don't see why I'd need you whenn I already have all these other elements giving me data on my efforts. All I know from your site is that I'd get everything I need in 1 place, & that I have to pay $1 to see if you've got it organized in a useful manner.

One good thing I noticed was flawless rendering on my BlackBerry, which apparently is a challenge for many.

There's mention on HN somewhere about a website that gives you feedback on your site when you give feedback on someoneelse's site. A 1:1 trade. Don't remember what it was, maybe "Critique" or something. May be worth checking out.

Best of luck!

[xavierkelly]

Thank you for the insight will correct the grammar and spelling mistakes.

[bluefox14]

tried to sign up for demo. didn't work. can you pls fix it?

[xavierkelly]

Try this one: https://overviewmarketingsolutions.com/checkout/?rid=mdX10J