[MalcolmDiggs]

I enjoyed the deck, a few ideas:

1. I had to skip around a bit to learn what FP was, then I came back and started reading from the beginning again. I think it's be helpful to provide a small amount of background in the very beginning (perhaps even just a tagline would suffice), so that the reader understands the context before they read the market overview.

2. This probably goes without saying, but the financials aren't filled in yet. For a product that has a beta launched, I'd want to see traction and revenue numbers above all else. If you don't want to share financial/growth numbers publicly that's fine, as long as the investors you're pitching get to see them.

Hope that helps.

[polquaser]

Hi Malcolm,

Good point, I was looking through a bunch of slide deck templates and they had the product description / game overview after the market sections hence the reason I've laid it out that way. To be honest, I prefer it the way you describe as well, I'll switch them over.

Regarding finances, I had a cash flow forecast for the next 3 years but it was based on modest financing and organic growth. I'm working on a scaled up version - to the investors I sent a business plan with the old forecasts with a small addendum of what the scaled up model looked like.