[rudolf0]

Can't agree with you more, both for refactoring code and editing prose.

I find it also sometimes helps to perform the revisions while in a somewhat altered state of mind (be it mood, setting, music, minor inebriation, or otherwise). It helps you look at the first draft with fresh eyes and see better ways of structuring things and removing excess. Make a version with your prospective changes, then compare the before and after copies a day or two later (this time sober if you weren't before...).