Ask HN: Is English in our app Elimi goofy or not? :)

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6 points by apa-sl 4086 days ago

Hi all. As we are not native speakers, I wanted kindly ask you to take a look at our mobile app Elimi (http://www.ElimiApp.com) and let me know if our English is goofy or not.

If you will see any error/not so perfect wording - please let me know in the comment. Thank you!

And what is it all about? Elimi is a game where looks & BRAIN matters.

How it works? 1. BROWSE people & their games near you. 2. PLAY with people that you like. 3. CONNECT and chat only with the best ones.

1 comments

davidddavidson 4083 days ago

I didn't download the app but there are various English grammatical errors in this post and on your landing page (images included) which could do with some professional proofreading. Even the tagline of "Looks & BRAIN matters!" could use some work in my opinion.

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