[alanctgardner3]

Maybe it's just me, but I found the copy insufferable. I don't think I'm the target audience, but there's some irony in hitting a wall of text complaining about how people write too much and think they're Shakespeare. It could be a lot clearer and more direct.

[lloyddobbler]

Agreed. Worth taking the whole thing and first running it through the filter of 'WIFM' (i.e., the first question you answer shouldn't be 'What type of app is Must?', but instead, 'What does Must do for me, the user?').

Then, worth taking all the copy and running it through http://www.hemingwayapp.com.