[mydpy]

Wow. What a transformation. I understand the product very well now. The video is a fantastic addition (some kinks need to be worked out, but others have addressed those).

My suggestions: 1. Use consistent bolding and hightlight features (and terms) or actions of your product.

  For example, USE <b>#HASHTAGS</b> TO ORGANIZE YOUR
               <b>CHATS/LISTS</b>
  OR 
               USE #HASHTAGS TO <b>ORGANIZE</b> YOUR 
               CHATS/LISTS

2. Use direct rhetoric

  For example, USE #HASHTAGS TO ORGANIZE YOUR
               CHATS/LISTS
  vs. 
               ORGANIZE YOUR CHATS/LISTS WITH #HASHTAGS

3. Reference quotes from your users. I.e., "quote" - John, Scrum Master for MyApp.com.

4. Shorten the hover-over text for BOOST PRODUCTIVITY, CONSOLIDATE APP DATA, etc. Make it short and sweet.

Biggest feedback: My original comment was I couldn't see the vision of your product. Now, it is very clear. Kudos.