[steveklabnik]

> but it's concise and it works. When shooting for first impressions, it might be worth focusing on the 30 minute intro or some other document instead. I didn't touch TRPL until I had been sufficiently sold on the language from other venues to commit to learning it.

Thanks, this was literally my hypothesis for the intro, like qualifying a lead: give enough to get you interested, then either give you more or say good day, depending. Maybe this is just better as the intro itself, or many this draft is at the wrong level of abstraction, we'll see.