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by Machow
4156 days ago
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For what it's worth, in Psychology (by APA standards) 1st person voice is discouraged, but so is passive voice. In the passages you use, removing 1st person (almost) requires using passive voice, but I would say removing 1st person voice is what discourages a very informal, prosey style, while the frequent use of passive voice often feels indirect. |
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"Here we make use of measurable selection."
So, use of the first person, plural is quite widely accepted in nearly all of current and recent mathematics.
I wrote my Ph.D. dissertation this way, and one professor said "When you say 'we' maybe I don't agree?" and thankfully a fellow student spoke right up and defended me; she explained that using "we" was standard in mathematics.
Once I was trying to socialize with a high school English teacher and sent her a draft of a paper I was about to publish in some applied mathematics and asked her to give the paper a critical reading. Soon she asked me if using "we" was standard in mathematics, and I had to say yes. She gave me no more feedback! Gee, that's much better than what I got from English teachers in high school and college!
In the end, I first learned to write in college and by writing proofs in pure mathematics; the reason I was able to soak up the lessons was that such writing, as English, is so darned simple. Later I branched out from such simplistic writing.
Later I was trying to socialize with a woman who was a secretary in a university. She confessed that, in her experience typing, etc., the really clear writing was from the professors of mathematics and the physical sciences. Maybe she was just trying to butter me up!