[karlkfi]

Well, for one thing, looking at the screenshots and game description leaves me with no desire to play it... This kind of "advertisement" also makes me feel like I did you a favor copying/pasting the link to look at it. You need to give people who have already clicked the link a reason to pay $3.

After going the extra mile to then click on your facebook link, scrolling down to find the link to a video (the into story video), it now seems apparent that the production value for this game is really low. Almost static screen with an old guy's mouth flapping up and down and text coming out? Boring! Text that leaks out of the thought balloon? Amateur!

Sorry if that was harsh, but I'll pass.

[aloventures]

Thanks for your time and response. By the way, I wasn't trying to advertise it or expecting any sales from this post in HN. I wanted user feedback. Thanks again.