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by SixSigma
4194 days ago
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This is not "academic writing", it is writing trying to sound academic. At my University you would get higher regard for your version and consequently better marks. If it is a subject you are interested in, then George Orwell's essay on writing style [1] is worth a read. [1] https://www.mtholyoke.edu/acad/intrel/orwell46.htm |
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I also highly recommend William Zinsser's On Writing Well. It's a perfect gem of a book and improved my writing more than anything else ever has.