| - Way, way, waaaaaaaay too much text. - Odd color and layout choices: -- Why is "Enterprise" in scary black? -- Why are some things vaguely centered (but not), other items right-aligned, and then back to left-aligned? -- From the top, we go through blue, light-gray, orange, grayish-blue, black, yellow, dark-gray, blue, etc. colors. - Bottom menu links don't work. - "It's as easy (and awesome as pie)" should probably read "It's as easy (and awesome) as pie" - "Hoot doesn't?" ... just... no. - Lots and lots and lots of little things like missing decimal commas ("2000 profile matches" should be "2,000 profile matches", etc.) - Resizing the browser window makes the hero image appear/disappear (Firefox 33, OSX 10.9.5, latest rMBP) - The website is missing a useful title tag (currently: "Audience Owl -/") - And again: Shorten ALL texts! Example for the top call-to-action:
"Next Level E-mail Marketing. [new line] Deep insights into your e-mail recipients" |