[ColinWright]

I think, then, that you mean "Intelligent suite ..."

I for one, baulk at the term "intelligent" in this context. It's over-used, over-hyped, and invariably under-delivers.

However, assuming you actually have something useful and interesting, might I suggest that you either get a copy-editor or proof reader to help hone your text. Your copy is your display window - if people see "mistakes" then the message can get lost or ignored.

A good article with specific examples will go a long way. Generalities don't sell - a story that resonates with your intended market is what sells.

Finally, I can't respond to the call to

    "Share your views on this product of mine."

because I haven't used it, am unlikely to want it, and can see no reason why I should invest my time to investigate it. You need to convince me that it's a trivial investment of time to be able to assess it enough. That's your challenge.