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by jacquesm
4267 days ago
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>I'm not saying this to be negative, necessarily, but something struck me in this essay, so I grep'd it. There are 47 instances of "I", by my count. You already have 2 instances of 'I' in a single sentence (not counting the one in quotes). So on average you're ahead of her already. |
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