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by Leander_B
4278 days ago
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Quick glance: - Remove the 'beta' tag [1] - If this is a real LP, remove all navigation, your goal is to catch e-mail addresses here - The headline and paragraph below are quite the same, use the paragraph to explain what I can do with it but keep it broad (plan your vacation, prepare a sales pitch, share recipes..) - "Invite me" is a strange choice of CTA wording as you don' get invited but rather create a group. Why not "Create Group" or "Get started" alternatively can add some text below 'ready in 30 seconds' as you do below in the copy. 1: http://blog.sumall.com/journal/how-boost-sign-ups-website-ch... |
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