| Hi, I know this is my first post, so apologies if it seems I’m exploiting the HN community. I’ve been lurking for a while and it’s quickly become my favourite forum. I really enjoy the discussions here and I’ve learned a lot from them (I have 7 pages of notes taken from HN threads on everything from cold calling to resources for learning Python). I haven’t contributed because I don’t feel like I have the knowledge to add anything of value to the discussions. In any case If this thread is inappropriate please delete it and I apologize in advance for the inconvenience. Now, for my question. I'm a University student in the UK, and with two friends I started a business called KitchPack selling packs of kitchenware and bedding to University students – delivering directly to their accommodation before they arrive. The idea is to save the hassle of having to lug everything from the other side of the country/world or the time and expense of buying it all upon arrival. We launched last year at our University and sold out in 2 days. Since then, we’ve partnered with 32 Universities/Landlords across the UK. Each of our partners has their own affiliate website (e.g. www.kitchpack.co.uk/standrews) which they market to their students through contractually agreed upon channels (i.e. social media, welcome packs etc.) in exchange for a commission on each sale. In addition we also have a global website for people who aren’t with any of our partners to order. As broke, non-technical students we’ve had to bootstrap the website on a £200 budget teaching ourselves HTML/CSS/PHP/JS to make it happen (we’re hooked on programming and have started learning Python). We’re proud of the result but we’re aware that it could be much better, and we’d really appreciate some brutal feedback from the knowledgeable folks on HN on what you’d change to make our website convert better. Here’s a link to the global website: www.kitchpack.co.uk Thanks in advance for your time, Jose |
First thing I noticed is no Google Analytics. Are you running some web analytics? If not this should be your first (and easy) update so you can monitor what is happening on-site.
Second I'd look to simplifying messaging. For example - you say 'Cosy bedding packs for students'. Why have 'for students'? There are lots of copy points like this that can be stripped and focused. Have a read through and see what you can remove.
Store/FAQ/Contact US - you can probably get rid of the headers saying what the page is. It just pushes content down with little benefit.
I tried the order process (York St John University) and it got stuck at 'order with paypal'. Should this be working? I tested from Australia so that may have an effect.
And take anything I said here with a grain of salt. A/B test changes. Opinion is never fact.