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by StephenGL
4322 days ago
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Not bad. Like the look. Some of your wording and errors makes it look like English is not your native language? Which is fine, but fix it either way. The bottom section is too casual. "If you would ask me". I'm on your site. I am asking you. Just tell me. |
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Anyway there is going to be lot of changes. The general feel and look now is relevant for me.