[guidedlight]

Okay, I was just reading through the landing page. Here are my thoughts:

* I'm not sure that 'self hosted' needs to be mentioned in the heading. You don't mention cloud or SaaS anywhere and have a big 'download' button so it should be obvious without stating it.

* "92five app covers all the basic project management features". Don't say your product is basic, the features should rock.

* Responsive. Yawn. Most managers don't know what this means. You don't mention 'mobile' anywhere in this section.

* Built with. This is the stuff you're interested in, and it's important but it has nothing to do with the product. Most users wouldn't care whether it's PHP, Java or Basic.

* Screenshots. Great we are past the techie bits and back to the actual product... But I don't know what I'm looking at.

* Wow, it's free! That's the best part and you mentioned it last... and in the FAQ. This should be up the top of the page!

I hope this helps.

[liotier]

> Wow, it's free

It is not free - you can't make derivatives. It is just free of cost.