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by ocolot 4338 days ago
Would something like "Listen to the favorite tracks of the musicians you love" be better?
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Beginning with an action verb is already a better start. Another possible way to reword could be, "Listen to tracks your favorite musicians love."

Side note: what's up with the background moving along with mouse cursor? It was a little distracting at first, but I'm guessing the purpose is to make the site feel like you're browsing through a record store?

yep, that's precisely the idea! I think I'll remove the parallax to reduce potential distractions.

thx for your tagline proposal, I think it is the best up to now!

"Listen to your favorite bands' favorite songs"
hey hansy, I just pushed you tagline live, thx for the idea!
Always happy to help! Keep A/B testing and you'll eventually arrive at the optimum solution. Good luck with the website!
Yes.