RealTalk will enable you to communicate with businesses on your smart phone. Picture a messaging layer on top of your old phone book, but in your hands.
That description is a big turn off. I don't need RealTalk to communicate with businesses on my smartphone. I already have a phone, email and web access on it. Maybe even a dedicated app for that business.
Why not just say "RealTalk lets businesses handle customer service via SMS"?
Why not just say "RealTalk lets businesses handle customer service via SMS"?