[minaandrawos]

Interesting feedback, I didn't expect the exclamation marks to have such an affect. It is more of my personal writing style, however since there were two remarks on the exclamation marks, I edited the article and cleaned out some of the exclamation marks. Hope you enjoy the article.

[oldmanjay]

I do find it an interesting article, I don't want you to think I'm entirely negative. I just kept stumbling at the punctuation. It's more about me than you.