[cheapsteak]

Fiddled with it in with the web inspector, here's a mock up of what I think might look better (was going to send you the edited css but the tab crashed while I was taking the screenshot..)

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/324756/PaperBox%20%20%20...

I think it might be a good idea if you could cut down the copy you have for the featurettes by about 1/3

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edit: also, if you can swing it, a quick video demo might be a nice alternative to swap out the image e.g. http://www.domo.com/company/what-is-domo and http://monanetwork.com/

[lifeisstillgood]

And welcome to five grands worth of consultancy, courtesy of a skilled practitioner, a lunch hour, and HN

This is what amazes and inspires me about open source and places like HN - the value of community and respect is greater than rubies - yet had the GP offered five bucks for a quick look everyone would have been outraged.

Good luck with the fonts !

[danbucholtz]

Wow, way cool! I agree, your design looks much cleaner and more sophisticated! Thanks!

[cheapsteak]

Glad you liked it :)

I don't typically do design either but got hit with a string of marketing-microsite gigs of late and have a sort of formula down. (basically things my designers yelled at me to fix - spacing, font weight, font size)

Best of luck with your startup! And if at all possible consider Google Drive integration? This is actually something I would use (would love to be able to easily scan receipts and chuck'em ), except dropbox is $10.99/month for 100G, while GDrive is $1.99/month for 100G, kind of a no brainer as a cheapskate :P