[henrixd]

You obviously are quite young. You should avoid using all provocative terms and be more boring (young != stable). You should treat web page as an company. You need to change your domain-name. When figuring out names, think things that are clever but creates feelings of respect. Clever only with the way that tells you are intelligent.

Normally I don't like advertisement like this, but you were very open and disclosed your agenda. This kind of page is actually very good starting point to learn these things. To actually do something, instead of just practicing theory or doing small programs for your self.

And I really like your big changing images, they are pretty. Thats the feeling you have to bring to whole web page. At bottom all those yellow free texts feel like something from '80 and that epic text there was something that would've make me change host.

One small last thing. When you ask people "How to make your very own web page?" thats giving them more problems to solve. You should give answers, like "Here make easily your own web page here"

Anyway, I haven really have my coffee yet so.. don't judge me, these are just few my ideas.. good luck.

[bbrutalhhonesty]

You're right, I am pretty young. But I'm surprised you could tell that by my web design; bravo! Addressing your first point: would you suggest a domain name change?

The yellow 'Free' texts do come off a little.. slimey.. Thank you for bringing that to my attention.

I'll definitely be changing the title to something that sounds a little more solution-like.

I appreciate your feedback. If you think of anything else, please let me know!