| It's pretty bad, IMO. > Write skilfully, and write powerful and eloquent blog posts, books, and more. * The repetition of "write" is annoying. * The use of multiple adjectives to describe a list of things is awkward and wordy. * "Blog posts" shouldn't be the first item, because it's easy to read "blog" as modifying "books" too. * "And" is a weird conjunction here. Is writing powerfully and eloquently separate from writing skillfully? I'd have two separate bullets: * Write skilfully. * Create eloquent books, blog posts, and more. I'd also make the other bullet points start with a verb ("Receive two books in one" etc). I don't think I'd ever be that picky about the writing if it weren't the marketing copy for a book full of writing advice. As an aside, the "skilfully" spelling is pretty jarring for Americans (or at least for me), but it's apparently correct in the rest of the English-speaking world. TIL. |