[al3x]

A little proofreading and peer review would have gone a long way.

We do, eventually, need different models of sharing identity and personal data on the web, but this is fairly incoherent.

[markup]

I can't really imagine a better peer review other than hacker news to be honest. However I wish I'd got a more replies when I tried to get skilled people to read this (expecially from the english mothertongue), but that didn't happen.