OK, here is the first 40% of my (light) edit of the original post. This took about 90 minutes which is longer than I thought it would. The rest can be done Sunday...
OP: is this too far from your inner voice, what you intended? Is the edit worth finishing?
I'm having to link to the text file as HN says the 1200 word extract is too long.
OP: is this too far from your inner voice, what you intended? Is the edit worth finishing?
I'm having to link to the text file as HN says the 1200 word extract is too long.
Markdown
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/8403291/Dijiwan-rewrite
Formatted to 55 col
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/8403291/Dijiwan-rewrite2
PS: I need to sort my editing tools out! I just used two plain text editor windows side by side and it was clunky.