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by KhalPanda
4435 days ago
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Hey, since you asked, a couple of things that I noticed: - "Is trial fully functional?" -> "Is the trial fully functional?" - "it's only $5/month with 14 days trial period." -> "it's only $5/month with a 14 day trial period." - "install the app on unlimited number of devices." -> "install the app on an unlimited number of devices." Those are just a few minor ones - it may be worth proof-reading the rest of your copy more thoroughly, given that I noticed those in <30 seconds. Good luck! |
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