[jorganisak]

This is very useful and thoughtful feedback - thank you.

Having just deployed this app up last week, I am experimenting with different ways to describe it. I was unsure of the "introvert" tact to begin with, and am now certain it is not the best choice.

Rather than misunderstanding introversion (as you claim I do simply from reading an experimental tag line for a web app), it is more likely that I failed at capturing the essence of the product in the tag line. There is plenty of successful marketing copy that uses words differently than a thoughtful definition would dictate.

I think the wise choice is to remove both notions of blogging and introversion from the description, and focus more on the process of writing. My goal is to create a place to write on the web that feels offstage from the large social networks that I believe extroverts thrive on.