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by lotsofmangos
4495 days ago
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Life is often convoluted as much as it is simple, also that story details an example of parallel construction which is a technique that has been shown to be in current use, while yours seems more of a description of a movie you saw while too drunk to be really paying attention. |
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Bad cops shoot people for no reason all the time, relatively speaking, so this story has plenty of precedence, unlike the above story, which is pure conjecture.