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by tmetzner
4516 days ago
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Two quick thoughts:
1. still fairly wordy on several slides (I know, it's REALLY hard to whittle down more)
2. you only hint at how you might make money: biz model should be very clear (you do a good job explaining how you'll spend $, but not make $) |
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