[samuelhulick]

Thanks for the kind words, and the critique!

Slide 9: Good point, I was kind of unclear. I was referring to how that was the only place on the page that referred to Start, whereas almost all of the rest of page's content was Find-centric.

Slides 26-28: I kinda thought the interstitial title card alluded to that. Is there a better way you'd recommend?

Slide 35: Yeah, I tend to agree with you on that. That might have been an "orange pen" candidate. I was just commenting on their persistence, I suppose.

Slide 44: There's a chance this happened because there were no upcoming Meetups scheduled at that time. But I completely agree with you - hence slides 45 & 46.

Thanks again for your thoughtful commentary!