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by joshwayne
4612 days ago
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1) The Register call-to-action isn't clear what the result will be. Does it create an event? Will it let me download the app? How is this different than creating an account in the app? Can I not create an account in the app? 2) The floating "Learn More..." is unnecessary. People know how to scroll. 3) The alternating layout communicates that they're separate features rather than steps in a process. I would explore different ways to communicate the steps. 4) Make it very clear the problem your app is solving. Like petalpete mentioned in his suggestion, "event" is vague and generic. Try to use terms that clear and specific like concert, holiday party, etc. 5) Maybe consider curating the recent images. Some of them are fairly low quality. |
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