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by scoj
4613 days ago
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I agree with a lot of the other thoughts. Specifically, the first paragraph needs to be shorter and clearer. (There is also a typo in it "...with others at who are at the same event...") Also, I would suggest changing the main button from "Register" to "Get Started" or something else. |
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