[pedalpete]

I agree with namenotrequired, but what I would do is talk to your visitors as you would talk to a normal person. When you first described Muro to your friends, did you say "we're building a social event photography platform"? I suspect not, you probably said "We're going to let you groups of people easily share photos based on xyz", or something like that.

Try to stay away from the word "event". It's nice that it's generic, but it also doesn't really give people an idea of how they'd use it. Saying something like "all conference goers photos in one place", "all concert goes", "all ...". You could even do something nice where the only thing change changes is the type of event, and it just scrolls through.

I also don't like your "find out more button", it covers your register button and doesn't look very good. People should be able to figure out that their is more on your page a better way.

[namenotrequired]

More good points, thanks for adding to mine.:)