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by ihsw
4662 days ago
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There are some grammatical and capitalization errors, and numerous comma splices (stringing similar sentence fragments together in an effort to form a coherent statement). There was also usage of very short sentences in repeated succession. Those are mostly stylistic issues but they're indicative of non-native grasp of the English language. Furthermore it's clearly written by someone with enough capability to express themselves eloquently and succinctly, but as mentioned it's clearly non-native. |
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