| A few items: 1) Lose the iPhone 3g picture. You need to be up to date on that. It should be an iPhone 5 or newer Android smartphone. 2) Lots of little grammar issues: - "Providing Realtime Advertising Data by Analyzing Pictures, in a blink of an eye" You're switching between capitalizing the headline and then not at the end -- should be either: Providing Realtime Advertising Data by Analyzing Pictures, In the Blink of an Eye Or Providing real-time advertising data by analyzing pictures in the blink of an eye. -"Many companies pay alot of money" vs. "Many companies pay a lot of money". Although, I would change this to say something like, budgets for mobile advertisement are expected to grow X% over the next 2 years. Or something like that. The current statement comes off as "I've heard that some people spend a lot of money, so we're planning on selling things to them." It sounds like a rookie. -"Many companies loose alot of valuable customers" vs. "Many companies lose a lot of valuable customers". Even here I would stick to X% of customers are lost because... -And thats where PictAlyze. Should be "that's where PictAlyze" 3) Site organization could use some work. It would look much better if you stuck with 2 columns and rotated between a picture and a section of text opposite the picture on the column next to the image. |