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by ar4s
4677 days ago
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It's cool you believe in your product and its potential. At a first glance, I'm really interested in trying it out, but yeah "This is gonna change the world" kind of mantra really isn't what I need to see from and center. I don't know who you are, so unfortunately it comes off as pitchy. Tell me how this will help me convey and consume content. Why will it change my world? |
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