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by 3stripe
4710 days ago
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I think your copy needs some work too... I just skim read the page and still have no idea what Bamrang does. Replacing "Help Make The World A Little More Accountable" with something more specific might be a good place to start. Also, too much text for a homepage... I guess some of this falls under the remit of the graphic design... because you need to demonstrate visually what your product does. Good luck! PS. I am also a graphic designer... http://www.greig.cc |
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